Thursday 23 March 2017

Descriptive Sentences

We Are Learning To: use descriptive words to make our sentences have more detail

We started with one thing and kept adding more detail to it. Here are some examples we looked at and discussed.

Here are some of the interesting sentences we came up with during writing this week:

Valentine: The mad bird flew to the sky.
Azayah: The good small bird few away to the hotel fast.
Isileli: The blue bird.
Shaista: The colourful bird.
Althea: The angry bird.
Makayla: The beautiful and colourful bird flew to the beach.
Aaliyah: The happy bird was sleeping on top of a nest.
Keevian: The ginormous eagle in the desert flew far, far away.
Verity: The gentle river flows peacefully and quietly in the forest.
Charlotte: The haunted house got struck by lightening in a storm at night.
Lucas: The super bird eats 1000 worms and feeds little birds the the nest.
Kahlia: The tui bird is flying to the ground.
Kahn: The huge happy city is by the volcano.
Jaydah: The snake slithered and slid until it got tired and lay down and had babies.
Will:  The devil bird was cruel and nasty.
Irmhild: The dolphins are swimming in the ocean happily together at the same time.
Aidan: The colourful cat ate his yummy, yummy food.
Oden: The evil bird killed everything that came next to it.
Harmony: The grumpy blue bird ate seven worms a day in his nest.
Zak: The yellow bird flew to his house.
Molly: The mummy bird had a sleep on the nest.
Carlos: The very fast bird flew across the world to his nest.

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  1. Hi it is me (Carlos Hibbard). My parents have looked at our school blog and we are commenting on it. Hi room 17.

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